User:Wrig36/Identity Politics/Dtalla Peer Review

General info
Username: Wrig36
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Wrig36/Identity Politics
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Identity politics

Evaluate the drafted changes
I love the topic you are reviewing. It is my first time reading about it and I always appreciate learning new ideas especially pertaining to Black women because I am one.

The lead of your article gives a clear overview of what identity politics is and some history about it. Even though, it doesn't include an overview of the article, it is clear and easy to decipher which part you added to it so I appreciate that.

Your content is very relevant to the topic. It is important to add up to date example of Black identity politics as it is still current. Your article deals with an underrepresented population, the Black woman.

Your tone is neutral in the parts you added. I cannot tell if you are pushing the BlackLivesMatter or the WhiteLivesMatter which is great. You do a good job giving the facts without interjecting your opinion.

Your addition to the article is well cited with great sources. I would say they are reliable sources. The only note that I have is on the 7th citation to make sure you check the red remarks before submitting your work. Other than that, it looks like you have peer reviewed articles and current sources relevant to your topic.

I believe that your contribution to the article will uplift the article and make it more relevant to our current world. The only improvements I would suggest would be to double check citations and possibly add a short statement at the beginning highlighting your contributions to the article.