User:Wrig36/Identity Politics/Snazzysugarplum Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * User:Wrig36
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wrig36/Identity Politics
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Identity politics

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see your bibliography in your sandbox so I know that you have fact checked what you wrote.

The addition of the "white identity" politics, and giving a clear example of the proud boys movement makes the article less biased and more clear.

The addition of the current events helps to clarify the subject and tie it together.

Lead matches previous sections, links are in working order.

Adding in of original links in first section is recommended.