User:WrittenasRae/Fairy Queen/BuildingBlue Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WrittenasRae


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:WrittenasRae/Fairy Queen
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fairy Queen

Evaluate the drafted changes
I read your article and it's really interesting! I am excited to see what you do with it! There are a few things that could use some help, but in no time you will be able to make this article even better than before! To begin, I noticed that this article could use more citations in almost every section. There are broad statments that seemingly give off an opinion, and I'm not sure if it is exactly yours or the persons that worked on this article before you, but regardless, there needs to be a little more citations. Adding in these citations to certain broad statments throughout each section will make the article more credible. Second of all, the introduction could use more information. It seems a little too small, and the rest of the article has such great information that I feel like could be incorporated into the introduction to give off a better understanding of it.

Overall, you have soruces that seem to relate to your article, and your on the right track. I know you can easily take on this article and make it something great!