User:Wsciales/Emergent literacies/Nlavinier Peer Review

Hi, your article is well written and very concise. You included a brief discretion of your articles major section, your content up relevant to the topic and up today. I was not able to identify if this article deals with a wikipedia equity gap, so I think it might be helpful to included a bolded header that identifies this content. The tone of your content is neutral. Your article seems to have diverse author representation based on your sources.

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