User:Wsehwail/Yiddish grammar/Iur444 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wsehwail, SPLL, Llill2, Bguti2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wsehwail/Yiddish_grammar?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yiddish grammar

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I believe this article could be its own section in an entire article. I would like to see the history of the Yiddish language, places and maps of where it is spoken or has ties to, and tables/graphs over their scripture as well as IPA charts of their vowels and consonants. The article could also use some pictures to break the monotony of text after text.