User:Wub916/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Adventure International


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is clearly organized and the language used is neutral. However, it does have several limitations. For one thing, not each claim is accompanied with citation.These claims are more likely to be original researches. Secondly, some citation are not from reliable sources, including " "Adventure soft UK | Retro Gamer". beyond these existing problems, the article needs to be expanded i terms of the lead section, which is not comprehensive for readers to get a full picture of the content following. also, the content can be improved by being organized in a more balanced way.


 * Sources
 * Adventure International

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Alice's Wonderland


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is not long enough to provide an encyclopedic coverage. To be more specific, the lead-in section is not long enough to summarize the main idea of the whole coverage, and the content in each following section is not sufficiently developed as well. Besides, the resources used to support the claims are scarce, which have to be supplemented. One of existing sources is even not available when you click it, that is, "Laugh-O-Gram Studio", which is not linked to available website.


 * Sources
 * Alice's Wonderland

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Cheese melter


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is too short, as it only has one section to describe what the cheese melter is. This article can be improved to a large extent by adding more sub-sections and detailed, specific descriptions. Also, reliable and abundant sources have to be added to support the content which will be edited. The content also have to be organized in a logical and understandable way when editing and improving the article.


 * Sources
 * Cheesemelter

Option 4

 * Article title
 * East Coast Grill


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has several limitations. For example, the lead-in section is not written in a logical and concise way, which may make readers feel confused about the main idea of this article. And the information in each section is too short to provide enough knowledge about the topic, which is not helpful for potential visitors. Thus the content has to be expanded with more established information. Then, essential citations and references are missing from this article.


 * Sources
 * East Coast Grill

Option 5

 * Article title
 * 1st Open Russian Festival of Animated Film


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has done well in providing a clear structure, balancing various aspects, and applying plain language. However, it could be improved by using proper and reliable sources. For example, one sentence in the lead section, "because of the extreme scarcity of Russian animation in the post-perestroika era, submissions from the last three years were accepted", could be supported with more reliable sources. This article does not cite any resources, which makes it less convincing. Besides, the lead section should be improved to provide a better overview about the following contents. Also, even though the article covers many aspects of the topic, each aspect should cover some explanations besides tables.


 * Sources
 * 1st Open Russian Festival of Animated Film