User:WutUpJut/Interactive media/Takeyce Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WutUpJut


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WutUpJut/Interactive_media?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Interactive media

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi WutUpJut,

I think your edits to this article is detailed and adds more depth. I like the addition of different types of interactive media like Commercial and Informational. I would include these types in the lead as a preview for readers. Your sources are also detailed and well rounded. The ImmersiveMe convention is also a good addition as a source for industry standards. I am looking forward to see how it continues to develop.