User:Wvc9/Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic/Loveyourlight Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wvc9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wvc9/Dagestan_Autonomous_Soviet_Socialist_Republic?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD: I think you've created a very strong lead, and it is good at describing what you've added, as well as the content at large. While it is a bit long, I don't think that necessarily detracts from the article.

CONTENT: The content is great. I appreciate that you added so much to the original article. There are some parts in the geographic section where some comments seem unnecessary, such as commentary on the soil quality, but at the same time it is relevant to the topic.

TONE AND BALANCE: The tone is fine and does not attempt to persuade the reader. It is very straightforward in the presentation of its information.

SOURCES AND REFERENCES: Admittedly, I would probably need more time to determine if this is truly the totally breadth of knowledge on the subject, but from what I can see, the content is accurate and up to date, and it covers a much-wider range than the previous. The sources seem reliable, and I can acknowledge the difficulty in finding a lot of material on defunct in this general area. The sources feature authors from different, areas, backgrounds, and eras, leading to a diverse make-up of references.

ORGANIZATION: The organization is fantastic. I think it reads very well. Perhaps some sections could benefit from subheadings or sub-subheadings.

IMAGES AND MEDIA: N/A

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS: I think you did a great job adding to this article. You've greatly expanded the content and provided relevant information. If anything, perhaps slightly altered organization and an added image or two.