User:Wvc9/Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic/Mxg2030 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wvc9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wvc9/Dagestan_Autonomous_Soviet_Socialist_Republic?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

-The lead section was copy pasted from the original Wikipedia article. I think it gives a general arching theme of what the article is about

-maybe divide the topographical regions into five separate sections to make the information more clear to the reader. Upload a map next to that section to make it more clear to the reader where exactly these regions are

-comma errors in Pre Soviet History but that section was definitely informative and had a lot of interesting information

-what polices did the Soviet Union implement in order to gain control of the region (besides state atheism) (how did forced secularization happen?)

-demographics sections needs to be more in depth

I want know more about these indigenous ethnic groups and how many were displaced

how did they adapt to the changing political climate

did they develop any specific methods of resistance against the Soviet Union?

-definitely add more sources and more content into your Wikipedia article

-your tone throughout the article is neutral and the body of your article is structured well