User:Wyatt J Thompson/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Dragon Storm (astronomy) - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article due to it being on topic for Planetary atmospheres. The topic is important as it helps us understand weather patterns on Saturn, and the Dragon Storm has some correlations with storms on Earth. While a shorter article, my initial impression was that there is good information that may not be complete for fully explained.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section clearly conveys the topic of the article, however, it does not read very succinctly. It also seems to go immediately into information, rather than setting up the rest of the article. The content of the article is fairly limited, but I have not taken the time to see how much more information is out there on the topic. The tone is neutral and appears non-biased. Sources however are scant, only referencing one NASA article and only having one in-text citation. In regards to the Talk Section, one person suggested a possible addition, but it was countered by another comment. Overall while the article isn't actively bad, I believe it has room to be improved and fleshed out.