User:Wyattlewis090/Turbo fluctuosus/Bhscott Peer Review

Great article with really good information! All of the content is relative to the article. I would see if you could try and find a source published more recently (but if there isn't one don't sweat it!) I like the image of the shells that you used for the page.

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