User:Wyattsnyder/Maria Margaretha Kirch/Zbrooks142 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wyattsnyder


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wyattsnyder/sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maria Margaretha Kirch

Content
The content added for the career opening line is small but is still useful in creating a more cohesive narrative. The first paragraph in the draft section, however, appears to repeat some information that is already mentioned in the career section of the main article, just a more distilled version. It could be useful in the 'early life' section, if that wasn't your plan already. but otherwise unsure of what the section would be for.

Tone and Balance
What you have so far does a good job of remaining neutral while adding useful information.

Sources and References
The career opening line you have written has a reference which is good, but the other paragraph you wrote has no citations along with it, that will need to be fixed before adding to the main article.

There so far is only one source, so you may want to look into finding more sources.

Organization
The content added is fairly well written and easy to read, it however doesn't have citations necessary to back it up. More organization would be useful to better understand how you plan on adding each of your sections to the main article. Such as copying over the section you wish to change and adding an "edits" section underneath it with what you are changing.

Peer Review Response
One of the first things I'll be doing is citing some other sources I have that are physical textbooks, from there I plan on reorganizing most of the early life section of the article and maybe adjusting Career if I have the sources. I had struggled early to find online sources for Mary Kirch however using her maiden name helped. Yes I have not yet finished the larger article of information, mainly caused by trying to make the article flow better however the information came from the book Dr. Sheppard shared and I have yet to cite that source which will be on the list of things to do. I will of course organize my sandbox over spring break in the process of completing the other tasks.