User:Wyogirl1/Lourdes Huanca Atencio/Aloeveralove Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Wyogirl1 and their group's page on Lourdes Huanca Atencio
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Wyogirl1/Lourdes Huanca Atencio
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):no page found

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Since this person does not have an article page yet, a lead has been made for her.
 * There's 24 citations throughout the article making the content and information well supported by several secondary sources. The sources all seem to be published within the last few years.
 * The image that has been placed does have a description written underneath it.
 * The article is properly organized in a well thought out order to highlight the key information about Atencio.
 * All of the content written on Atencio is clear and concise.
 * One way to make it easier and more appealing for the readers to go through the article is to make the paragraphs start differently. Under the FENMUCARINAP subsection, three of the paragraphs begin the exact same way and could be slightly confusing to the reader or make them feel it might be repetitive.
 * With this being a new page, the draft is built very similarly to other similar articles and includes information that is both recent and relevant to Atencio.
 * The numerical citations included throughout the writing is inconsistent as it is placed before the period, or other punctuation, and put afterwards at other times.
 * The content is written in a neutral and unbiased way, making it a strong article.
 * Throughout the writing, Lourdes Huanca Atencio's name is used in different ways. Sometimes it is her first name, last name, or middle and last names. After using her full name at the start, remain consistent with the name used to refer to her in the article.