User:X.Kyrstenn.x/Desire Area, New Orleans/Dreese2 Peer Review

Your lead was very concise and provides a good introduction for your article. Your content was up to date and I noticed that it included data and statistics that cover all aspects of your topic. Your tone is neutral and present no bias. All of your content is good, but you may want to credit a few more sources when providing data. Your images are very well cited and relevant to your article.

'''Thank you so much. This really helps me to see what direction to start heading to. I will be working this week to add all of my citations and a bit more to my article. In addition to adding pictures as well. Once I do that I will hopefully have another peer review and also go through it fixing grammatically incorrect errors and sentence fragments.'''

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