User:XCallanbur/American imperialism/Natrome2015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

XCallanbur


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XCallanbur/American_imperialism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * American imperialism
 * American imperialism

Evaluate the drafted changes
The additions to the Wikipedia article are very well done, they are relevant to the article, and help to fill in information in a timeline about American imperialism. I did not see anything for your lead but it seems pretty straightforward already. The tone fits in to the rest of the article, and it keeps a neutral tone and viewpoint throughout. The only changes I would make is change "formerly" to former, in the first sentence. All the links technically work, but I had to copy and paste them, while other links in the article seem to be clickable in order to open the article in a new window.