User:XIAO BING HUANG/The Selfie Culture on Chinese Social Media/Cirwin18517 Peer Review

Your article looks great so far!

My only feedback is (if you weren't already planning on doing this) perhaps adding a small sections on Erving Goffman and provide some more background on "the presentation of the self in everyday life" or any other relevant work he has done. It will give your article more credibility to have academic theories, essays, etc backing it up. I see short sections on relevant theorists on most Wiki pages.

Great work!

Caitlynn

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