User:XavierFanny/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * House of The Dragon
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has content that is relevant to the subject and is written neutrally. Each statistical claim in the article has a citation and the citation are all very reliable. The talk page of this article mentions the readers of Game of Thrones complaining about race-swapping. The article is quite short however the series is also pretty new which has something to do with it. I personally think this Wikipedia article can add some more background on the lead up to the events of House of the Dragon as well as talking more about the connection between House of the Dragon and Game of Thrones, the other HBO series based on George RR Martins novels.
 * Sources
 * https://www.thewrap.com/what-is-house-of-the-dragon-about-game-of-thrones-prequel/,
 * https://www.themarysue.com/heres-how-house-of-the-dragon-shapes-the-events-of-game-of-thrones/#:~:text=This%20is%20the%20one%20true,of%20House%20of%20the%20Dragon.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Fencing
 * Article Evaluation
 * Overall the article is good and seems quite neutral. I think the article could add a little more to the "History" section. There are three different types of fencing, which are, Foil, Epee, and Sabre. The article could add some more on explaining the differences between each style. The article also could go into more detail about Olympic fencing.
 * Sources
 * https://www.rookieroad.com/fencing/what-are-the-types/
 * https://www.ohio.edu/orgs/fencingclub/index_files/Page344.htm
 * https://stillmed.olympic.org/media/Document%20Library/OlympicOrg/Factsheets-Reference-Documents/Games/OG/History-of-sports/Reference-document-Fencing-History-at-the-OG.pdf
 * https://www.ohio.edu/orgs/fencingclub/index_files/Page344.htm
 * https://stillmed.olympic.org/media/Document%20Library/OlympicOrg/Factsheets-Reference-Documents/Games/OG/History-of-sports/Reference-document-Fencing-History-at-the-OG.pdf

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Senegalese Wrestling
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is very neutral but does not have a lot of information. This could be due to lack of archives and this sport gaining more attention from around the world more recently. I wish the article gave more information about a professional sporting body of Senegalese wrestling.
 * Sources
 * https://grapplezilla.com/senegalese-wrestling/
 * Sources
 * https://grapplezilla.com/senegalese-wrestling/

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Manfred Von Richthofen
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is not very neutral, it paints Von Richthofen in a heroic light. Although some may see him as heroic, others may seem him as a villain. The article can have a lot more to add on the early life of Von Richthofen. I wish there was also more information on the planes Richthofen was flying. If I were to do this article I would do more research on his earlier life and write about that.
 * Sources
 * https://www.history.com/topics/world-war-i/manfred-baron-von-richthofen#:~:text=Baron%20Manfred%20von%20Richthofen%20was,military%20school%20at%20age%2011.
 * Sources
 * https://www.history.com/topics/world-war-i/manfred-baron-von-richthofen#:~:text=Baron%20Manfred%20von%20Richthofen%20was,military%20school%20at%20age%2011.

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Catania
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is a solid article however there are not a lot of visuals in this Wikipedia article. The section about "Main Sights" can be organized better in my opinion. The citations on this article are reliable and the links are all valid links. Out of all the article I have viewed, the talk page on this article had the most critiques out of any.
 * Sources
 * https://www.thethinkingtraveller.com/italy/sicily/towns-and-cities-in-sicily/catania