User:Xenopusgal17/Seadragon Genomes/Dclark636 Peer Review

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 * Xenopusgal17


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Peer review
Well written article. Some minor spelling/ grammatical errors that can be easily fixed. Lead describes the main points of the article. Citations are recent and relevant to articles goals.

Overall a very interesting and professional article. Towards the end with the Ruby Seadragons it seems to lose some of the genetics focus that it carried in the beginning, instead looking at phenotypic differences. If there are relevant described genes it would be beneficial to add those. Pictures of the different organisms could help give a visual on the crypsis and other traits described throughout the article.

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