User:Xiajiao3510/Sex-selective abortion/Dhar4601 Peer Review

General info
Xiajiao3510
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Xiajiao3510/Sex-selective abortion
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex-selective abortion

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes you made have significantly improved the article! I think combining the prevalence and reasons section is a good idea since the prevalence section is so short, but maybe you could still include a sentence about the data/lack of data around the prevalence of sex-selective abortion? That information is still important to include. I also like how you laid out your plan for the reasons section, as I think it will make the section more organized and concise.

The sources you use are reliable and provide information that enhances the article. The writing is also professional and has a neutral tone. Overall, I think you've done a great job with your changes so far and I think they will improve the article. Great work!