User:Xiajiao3510/Sex-selective abortion/Willa Wei Peer Review

General info
Xiajiao 3510
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Xiajiao3510/Sex-selective abortion
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sex-selective abortion

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Good job! Everything in the article is relevant to the topic, and the sources you used support the claims very well. The article is neutral, all the links work, and they come with reliable references. One thing I noticed is that the UN article you used is from 2012, the Dove Press article is from 2014, and Daniel Goodkind’s article is from 2015. I think these are great sources, but you may find some recent articles focusing on your issue.

One minor thing is that I think you forgot to cite: “Low fertility can be a result of social norms of family size, rising marginal costs of an additional child, or birth control policies.” Another thing I realized is that you mentioned you would discuss the following topics: sex selection technology, socioeconomic reasons for son preference and daughter aversion (such as 'Culture preference,' 'Dowry,' 'Trivers–Willard hypothesis'), fertility decline, and the 'One-child policy.' I think these are great topics to cover in the wiki article; however, it may be too much work to do. If you like, you can focus on one particular issue and fully develop it.

Another thing I noticed is that you do not have "Lead", but you describe what you did to to article pretty clear.