User:Xiangcaidou/Comb Ceramic/Thecanyon Peer Review

General info
Xiangcaidou
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Xiangcaidou/Comb_Ceramic?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Comb Ceramic

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is really cool. I would love to see a map of where it has been found. I would recommend editing the first headline to say "Definition" and not "Lead". I like the summary. The content is relevant and up to date and the sources are appropriate, as well as the equity gap it addresses. Pottery tells us so much about what civilizations used to be like. The content is neutral. I would recommend adding some more detail about the value and significance of comb pottery.