User:Xiangcaidou/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%99%B6%E7%93%B7%E5%99%A8

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Because this page only explains, explains some of the raw materials and the temperature needed to make pottery items. There is no detailed explanation of the history and modern application of this object.

Although this page is in the Chinese language, probably most Chinese people have a preliminary understanding of such items, but it needs more detailed explanation.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section


 * 1) The beginning of the article contains a concise summary of ceramics, but only summarizes the characteristics of the objects from the perspective of production.
 * 2) If nothing is updated from the current content, the beginning does include a brief summary that summarizes the main parts of the article. However, the content of the article should not only include the production of ceramics, which is biased towards the direction of a handicraft class.
 * 3) The clues are too simple.

Content


 * 1) The content of the article is mainly biased towards the production of ceramics, without mentioning any history or other information related to it.

Tone and Balance


 * 1) the article is neutral.
 * 2) none unbalance sentences.

Sources and reference


 * 1) these sources are not current. the new one is stop at 2019
 * 2) there is a website i cannot open

Picture layout


 * 1) There is no attraction whatsoever, although the picture explains the content of the article. But this is not enough.

overall impression


 * 1) the content is too simple.
 * 2) people cannot know the object completely.
 * 3) the good point is if people want to know how to made a ceramic will be very easy and people can identify different ceramics well.