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the link to the problem article: https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Binge_eating

sources for the information you plan to add: http://www.helpguide.org/articles/eating-disorders/binge-eating-disorder.htm

a rough draft of the corrected article:

Binge eating disorder is a disease reflected in the compulsive overeating.

It has the following features:

1.People overeat frequently and feel out of control and cannot stop.

2.People feel very painful and distraught while or after eating.

3.People want to make up the consequences of binge eating by some inappropriate and unhealthy ways.

The vicious cycle of binge eating

It can make people feel contented briefly, but after that, the self-accusation occurs to them, and they will use some crazy ways to keep their weight. Therefore, people overeat for feeling better, then feel worse, and go back to overeating for relief, which forms a vicious cycle.

Paraphrase Sources and complete article
What fans are

A device used for creating a current of air, especially:

1. A machine using an electric motor to rotate vanes in order to move air for cooling.

2. A tool whose shape is usually long triangle or semicircle is made of feathers, leaves, paper, cloth, etc. people usually wave it lightly in a hand to create a cooling current of air when they feel hot.

Various types of fans and their characteristics

1.Table Fans: small size, appropriate for personal space, cheap price, economical cooling

2.Pedestal Fans: height can be changed, provide powerful air

3.Window Fans: save space, bring in fresh air

4.Wall Mount Fans: save space, offer more air, suitable for industrial environment

5.Floor Fans: offer more air, save space, suitable for offices and warehouses

6.Tower Fans: small space, vertical shape, quiet

7.Ceiling Fans: on the ceiling, have a lot of styles to match room's decoration

8.Box Fans: flexible, suitable for various need of rooms

9.Misting Fans: suitable for outside areas

10.Industrial Fans and Blowers: made of durable metal or steel

11.Decorative Fans: have a lot of different styles

12.Bathroom Exhaust Fans: used in bathroom, prevent excess moisture

Origin of Fans

The fan making history is at least 3000 years old, and the earliest fans can be dated from 3000 BC according to the record. Fans originated in China. The first European folding fans were brought into Europe by businessman and religious orders from China, and important European people had fans to show their higher position then.

Choose a stub and find Sources
a. the link to the problem article：https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fan

b. the link to your sources：1. http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/fan 2. http://www.air-n-water.com/electric-fan-guide.htm 3. https://www.thefanmuseum.org.uk/fan-history

c. the link to the talk page of the problem article：https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Fan

d. a list of 3 sections I will add to the article:

1. what the fans are

2. Various types of fans and their characteristics

3. origination of fans

NPOV article
Article title: Socialism

Article link: https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Socialism

Description of the problem: This article has something wrong or not easy sentences, such as content and grammar. And I want to add something about socialism with Chinese characteristic.

Specific ways in which you would fix it: I will find the correct information from the reliable website, then add them and fix the mistakes in Wekipidia.

Sources for the information (link, title, description)

link: http://english.cri.cn/3126/2007/09/20/176@275945.htm http://www.dictionaryofeconomics.com/article?id=pde2008_S000173 title: What is socialism?

description: a website

old text:

Socialism is an economic and political system where the workers control the means of production, such as machinery or farmland, instead of their bosses. Those people that advocate this cooperative society are called socialists. Another key belief is that goods and services should be produced for the people's use, not for profit. Socialists believe that everything in society is made by the cooperative efforts of the people.

Karl Marx is most well known, however, as the architect of the theory of socialism, and communism. He wrote the comprehensive book about capitalism, socialism, and communism, called "The Communist Manifesto". Friedrich Engels helped him to write this book, and paid for much of Marx's work and research.

new text:

Socialism is an economic and political system where the workers control the means of production, such as machinery or farmland, instead of their bosses. Those people that advocate this cooperative society are called socialists. Another key belief is that management and portion are supposed to based on public interests. Socialists believe that everything in society is made by the cooperative efforts of the people.

Karl Marx is the most well-knowned architect of the theory of socialism, and communism. He wrote a book about capitalism, socialism, and communism, called "The Communist Manifesto". Friedrich Engels co-wrote the book, and paid for much of Marx's work and research.

citations:

What is the socialism with Chinese characteristic

Socialism with Chinese characteristics combines the basic principles of scientific socialism with the facts of building socialistic China. Socialism is the common rule and essential feature of the practice, and Chinese characteristics are what the basic principles of socialism really represent in China. And the scientific socialism theory is raised by Teng Hsiao-ping, the chief designer of opening up and economic reform in China.

1. For the economic aspect, China insists on the economy with different types of ownership basic system of market economy with the public ownership in the leading role.

2. For its political aspect, China sticks to a system of the People's Congress, a system of multiparty cooperation and political consultation, and a system of regional ethnic autonomy.Socialism with

3. For its cultural aspect, China keeps its socialist value system at the core of social trends, while respecting differences and expanding common grounds.

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add some information for Brandon Lee https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Brandon_Lee

'''OUTLINE:

1. His early life

2. His early career

3. The last film he played, The Crow, and his death'''

Early Life
Brandon Lee lived in Hong Kong for his first eight years. Lee lost his father when he was only 8 years old, and then moved to Seattle with his mother and sister. Lee faced a lot of difficulties when he was a teenager. He moved around a lot, coped with being the son of a martial arts legend, and he dropped out of high school several times.

Early Career
Lee made his first feature film, Legacy of Rage (1986). And around that time, he appeared in Kung Fu: The Movie with David Carradine, which aired on television. But then, Brandon Lee had his promising career cut short by tragedy, much like his father. A few years later, returning to the big screen, Lee made three action films: Laser Mission (1990), Showdown in Little Toyko (1991) with Dolph Lundgren and Rapid Fire (1992) with Powers Boothe.

About the last film he played,The Crow, and his death
Lee played Eric Draven in The Crow, a film that derived from comic books of James O'Barr. In this film, he played a murdered rock musician. But there were a series of mishaps during the scene of shooting. Lee was performing his death scene for the film. He was supposed to perform shoot to death by a prop gun, but the bullet in the prop gun was real and it pierced through his abdomen. Then, he died on March 31, 1993 because of his injuries. Then he was buried next to his father in Seattle on April 3, 1993. And The Crow was released the next year after additional scenes were shot to complete the film. Audiences turned out in droves to see Lee's haunting final film.

source:source Xiaoxuxu0313 (talk) 19:57, 3 February 2015 (UTC)