User:Xinya Gong/Summer Time (Album)/Haolongzzz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Xinya Gong


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Xinya Gong/Summer Time (Album)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * I believe this is a new article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Xinya,

I do admire your bravery in creating a brand-new wiki page on yourself, there should a round of applause. You do have a clear lead section and it defines your topic well. Overall, solid improvements so far.

However, I think you should add more sections to introduce this album in depth, so readers could get to know it better. Plus, I noticed you have a lot of sources from QQ music, so maybe you could try to include some sources from Spotify or Apple Music. Furthermore, I personally consider the Release section should go under the Introduction because they kind of overlap with each other, and another area of improvement for this article will be to shift toward a more encyclopedic tone.

Here is a well-rounded example to see how a similar wiki page is handled, Justin Bieber: Never Say Never.

Wish my advice could help.

Haolong Zhang