User:Xstallatsx/Globalization in India/Meeravb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Xstallatsx


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Xstallatsx/Globalization_in_India?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Globalization in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added has improved the overall quality of the article. However, I am not too sure what part of the article this section would be added to. It is concise and clear. It is also well written, and gives a deeper analysis of social mobility.