User:Xuming Li/Beef soup noodle/Xuming Li Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Jaditol/Beef noodle soup


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jaditol/Beef noodle soup
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Beef noodle soup

Lead
Guiding questions:

The Lead has been updated to reflect the new content added by my peer. The Lead does have an introductory sentence that concisely describe the articles topic. The Lead also includes a brief description of the article's major sections. The Lead does not include information that is not present in the article. The Lead is concise.

Content
Guiding questions:

The content added is relevant to the topic. The new content was about the different types of noodle styles, which is also up-to-date. The content fully covers about the different types of the noddles. The article does not deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps, and does not address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topic.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:

The content is added neural with no biases, which means that the content added does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of either types of the noddle.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

All new content is backed up by reliable secondary source of information, including Baidu, a Chinese version of Wikipedia, governmental sources, and etc. The content does accurately reflect what the cited sources say. Even though some of the sources are not in English, the author does a great job of translating them into English. The author also includes several English articles. The sources are thorough and current. The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors because they speak different languages. There are some better sources available because some of the English articles might have a better translation version of the information. The links all work.

Organization
Guiding questions:

The content added is well-written because they are concise, clear, and easy to read, which contains a few grammatical errors. The content is well-organized in the section.

Images and Media
The peer did not add any new images or media.