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article: Television Addiction

In this article, the explanations are detailed and everything is revenant to the topic. There is nothing distract me from the topic, but in my perspective, I think it should also introduce when the television addiction this social phenomena started. The newest reference is from an article that published in 2013. It is not so outdated but it should offer a more academic article to be references that published in a recent year. Furthermore, it should better have the diagram to show the different population that is addicted to television in every year. The data will be changed so quickly because technology is keeping developing.

The tone of this article is neutral, and the information it offered is objective.

However, the views on this topic are not enough to support information. For example, it should have more reliable reference to be linked above the article. The first resource which comes from the article "Hidden addiction: Television" written by  Sussman S, Moran MB (2013) is reliable because both the two writers had studied in CA, USA. Moreover, their major are communication, medical, and psychology, which can make their opinion more academic. Therefore, they are a reliable publisher. And by reading that article, I can tell it is independent sources.

However, the second reference is not easy to find, the link is not working when I click it. It is a very serious problem which confuses the reader a lot.

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