User:Xxldana/Digital privacy/RachelKarenG Peer Review

Lead


 * The lead has not been touched, however the articles does require an update on the lead since additional content has been added

Content


 * the content merges well with the rest of the page and is very relevant, providing relevant information
 * the content added is up to date
 * no, there isn't any content which is missing or out of place
 * not applicable

Tone and balance


 * the content added is neutral
 * no, the article is well balanced and doesn't lean towards a particular bias
 * the viewpoints are neutral and in moderation
 * no, the content is very unbiased and even-handed

Sources and references


 * yes, all the sources are backed up with reliable articles
 * yes, the content is accurately represented
 * the sources are thorough and well well versed in the topic
 * the sources are current
 * the sources have a diverse spectrum of authors and point of views
 * the sources used seem to be the best fit
 * all the links work

Organization


 * the content is very concise and clear and has a good flow with the existing article
 * the content has minimal errors
 * the content is well organized and broken down into sections

Images and media


 * not applicable

New articles


 * not applicable

Overall impressions


 * the content has significantly improved the quality of the article and has added valuable information
 * the content uses well established and reliable sources, which makes the information more thorough
 * citations and hyperlinks can be added properly to improve the content

General info
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)