User:YALUWANG330/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
1.Yuchanyan

2.New media

3.Digital media player

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
1.It is an article that introduce a thing that base on history and I think all facts that related to history should be very serious.

2.This article is one of the course of mine.

3.Relate to course

Evaluate the article
1.There is no information that distracting me, the general information is neutral. However, I think there are too many information bout pottery are written but with no images about them .Also, word "sherds" is linked in the article but no related explanation in the link.

2. The definition of this article are mass and not clear and they are not coherently, so it is quite hard to understand. Information are academical, but I think it should have less research process than conclusion ,there are too many research details in each sections.

3.The link page of word "air mouse" does not exist ,however the information is comprehensive and introduces this page clearly.