User:YALUWANG330/Melanin theory/Ndongh10 Peer Review

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Melanin theory

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- The article is focused on the perception that having more melanin results in having "supernatural" abilities. I an unsure to the direction of the paragraph below and how it will be linked to the article's content. It will be definitely be interesting.

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In the article Melanin, afrocentricity, and pseudoscience from Bernard R. Ortiz De Montellano which is published in 1993, it gives an idea that some "Melanists" misrepresent human evolution, claiming that white Europeans are descended from albino blacks. The main problem with this ideological movement is that it will increase the scientific illiteracy that is already prevalent in the country, and that it will widen the gap between the races.(Montellano 1993)

https://doi.org/10.1002/ajpa.1330360604