User:YIFAN Andrew Wang/OLES2129

Activity 1 - Citation Hunt

The alternative to costly pipes to bring condensing cold water to the surface is to pump vaporized low boiling point fluid into the depths to be condensed, thus reducing pumping volumes and reducing technical and environmental problems and lowering costs

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ocean_thermal_energy_conversion&action=history

Activity 2 - From Scratch

Yoshitsugu Matsuoka is a Japanese voice actor I am knowledgeable with. The wikipedia page is created by Darkslug on 6 September 2011. At that time, Mr. Matsuoka was not such famous like he is now. So the page then was simple and all the information it contained was only about birthplace, company, nationality, birthday and those anime that he acted in. If I were the first person who created the page, at that time, maybe I would do the same thing as Darkslug did. As for what would I have done differently, according to my knowledge, I would search for some radio and event which is a good way to get more information about voice actor himself. If I were the second reader, I would try to search radio and event as well as follow all the information from when I read it till now. I would add characteristics and some interesting thing about him. Tutorial 3

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Page Matthew B. Brown

The article has been rated as Start-Class on the project's scale and it has been rated as Low-Importance on the project's importance scale.

If we want to evaluate the article's rating to the next tier, first we should provide references to reliable sources. Also, since Start-Class means the article is developing, in other words, it is quite incomplete, we need to add more content, citation and reliable sources to improve it. Of course, we should pay attention to improving writing style, grammar, spelling and so on to provide neutral views as much as possible.

Activity 2

Page Alistrati

Alistrati I added three citation needed on the bottom of the page for three part which are sports, education, and entertainment. I didn't found any reliable resource. I think it needs more citation to make the content more verifiable and reliable.

Talk:Alistrati And I created a discussion on talk page.

Activity 3

Alistrati I added close paraphrasing template.

Talk:Alistrati I created a discussion for close paraphrasing since I found that the sentences "Remarkable traditional community, the biggest of the area Zichni - Fillida. It's been up-graded to municipality of Alistrati with the "Kapodistrias" law and included the villages: Agioxori, Skopia, Mandili, Lefkothea and R.S of Aggista." is close to the source http://www.alistraticave.gr/index.cfm?id=9&lang=en

Activity 4

Alistrati I added cleanup template. I make a new paragraph one since I think the old one is not perfect. But I am not sure whether I am able to remove the old paragraph.

Talk:Alistrati I created a new discussion about cleanup hoping that someone can help me.

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Activity 1

Featured Article: Lettuce


 * The article has 56 reference resources.


 * Substantial overview of lettuce.
 * A clear structure with several headings and subheadings in a chronologically form such like seeds, cultivation, culinary use.
 * Lengthy yet maintains focus on topic. It cover a broad aspects of the topic - lettuce.
 * The inclusion of photos and nutrition tables.

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Fuzzy logic

citation 5 by visual edit

citation 6 by source edit.

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Article: Burke and Hare murders

Sources: reference 146 Hutton, Finoa (2015). The Study of Anatomy in Britain 1700-1900

Scholarship

Hutton looks at Manchester and Oxford to provide a comparative history of anatomical study. Using the Anatomy Act as a focal point, she examines how these two cities dealt with the need for bodies over two centuries.

The source was published by Medical.

I think the information within the source is independently verifiable since to write this book, Hutton make learning assisted by Manchester and Oxford Library. In other hand, Hutton studied and do some related work to Oxford and Manchester.

Context

The book was published on 6 Oct, 2015 and the page was created on 28 Oct, 2003. The topic it related to happened in 1828. It is a significant crime so sources now is more likely to talk about truth and fact.

The intent of information is to discuss the legacy of Burke and Hare murders case and Oxford and Manchester are two universities relevant to the case. The case impressed the question about anatomy field so the editor use this source to make a definition and cite a true story of anatomy question.

Content

The editor try to remind anatomy problem so cite a true story which is mentioned in Hutton's book. It didn't omit something or overrepresent the case. On contrary, it just give the information of the original anatomy crime.

The information is a fact.

It seems it out of style or structure since editor just use one sentences to cite the original case.

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The first article: Angels Brought Me Here

This is a music good article under Wikiproject Australia/Music. It has an overview on the top of the page and seven specific sections below. Also it has an infobox including all important information about this music in a simple writing way. I appreciate its structure since it is clear and easy to follow and read. I can find the right information I want as long as I click the section guide. On the other hand, I can also get a glimpse if I only want by watching the overview and infobox.

It has 37 references and two external link which provide broad, abundant information about the song. I can verify all sentences which are related to the original source and the source are verifiable and reliable. It quotes some sentences but all of them are less then one line. It paraphrase the original words in a good way with highly focusing on the topic and not changing the core meaning.

By reading the words, the editor didn't add its own opinion into it. In other words, I think editor have used neutral way to create the article. As a result of abundant resource and message, the article is less likely to change day to day.

It has two photos about the singer, however, I would like to suggest to give more images since watching the part named chart performance is not so vivid.

The second article: London Stone (riparian)

This is an article introducing the London Stone. This page doesn't include an infobox which I would hope to see cause in most cases I would hope I can get a summary of it quickly. In the first section which is named history, it seems that time is not clear. The first sentence begin with "until 1350" and the second initially says "in 1197" which confused me at first. On the other hand, it has enough information of the London Stone from history to features and so on which is a good aspect. It has 8 references and 4 external links which are less than the article above but still a good number of resource. I can verify and check by watching the resource.

I really appreciate it has 6 images which is an abundant resource of illustration. It makes reading relaxing and interesting. Additionally, the editor use neutral way to write as well by just stating the truth without bias or original research.