User:YSL123/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Players (magazine) (history portion)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It seemed like an interesting topic to research.

Evaluate the article
Content: Some grammatical errors (as should be at). Some words capitalized in one place and not in the other.

The label was open for a while so we can get some information from those years that it wan running.

Need more information on Zeudi Araya and show she was chosen ti be the women on the magazine.

They used people to push their content to marginalized groups.

Tone: The tone of the history portion sounded informative. I didn't feel like the author was being bias in any way. This is probably due to the fact that it was the intro and they have to explain things first.

Evaluating sources: When I went to follow two of the sources about the original owners of the magazine it took me to a page so I could write the Wikipedia pages for the founders. There isn't a page about them already.

When I followed the link to the Holloway House publishing company there was another error in one of the links on that Wikipedia page that led me to another empty page.