User:Yah100/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Environmental engineering


 * Article Evaluation
 * It covers the basics of 'what is Environmental Engineering', but the article fails to analyse the environmental issues that these engineers are seeking to solve, some of which were mentioned in the Lead.
 * It also fails to explain the licensing and registration requirements that these engineers must fulfill. Lastly, the Application sub-section is too bare-bone, and could use more research.
 * Overall, the Lead is detailed, but the rest of the article is lacking.


 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Reverse logistics


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article explains the clearly explains the concept of reverse logistics. This strength is encompassed in the well-written business implications sub-section.
 * However, anything past the basic theory is lacking, since real-world applications and problems of reverse logistics is ill-explored in their respective sub-sections.


 * Sources

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Sustainable packaging


 * Article Evaluation
 * The Lead is too detailed for a mere summary, so some of the evidence needs to be moved to their respective sub-sections.
 * The wording also has a biased feel to it, so I believe it can be re-worded to be more neutral.
 * Lastly, certain things mentioned in the Lead such as 'vague marketing titles' isn't further explored in the rest of the article, so the rest of the article needs to be fleshed out.


 * Sources

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Reusable packaging


 * Article Evaluation
 * I see that it's explaining the specific packaging containers that is used. To reflect this, a lot of images are used to depict these containers.
 * However, there is too many pictures in proportion to the amount of words, and as a result, there isn't much explanation for the function of the containers.
 * The lack of words also meant that the article was shallow in knowledge.


 * Sources

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