User:YamsLeap/Lacticaseibacillus casei/Jondya Jar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

YamsLeap


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Lacitcaseibacillus casei

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft contained all the aspects it was supposed to in a clear manner. The lead contained a precise introductory sentence that described the topic and major sections well. The links also seem to work as they were supposed to. All of the content seems to be precise and clear in what they are depicting. There seems to be no grammar errors or any images. A simpler wordage or mention within the Commercial Probiotic section when discussing the best-documented probiotics. It would enable a reader whom doesn't have a background in science, easier understand it.