User:Yang7707/Free Money Day/Katie.wheeler10 Peer Review

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Yang7707


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 * User:Yang7707/Free Money Day
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Free Money Day

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So far it does look like anything has been added to the article, but I think it's a great choice. It is very short and could use a fair amount of additions. I think if you are looking for something to add maybe the past events would be interesting or even adding a section about future events.