User:Yanqin Li/Monguor language/Suby1234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yanqin Li


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Monguor language

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is very concise and presents an overview about where the language is from. However the lead does not summarize what the rest of the article is about. The content added to this page is relevant, up to date, and well placed. All the content added seems to be facts that are backed up by reputable sources, no content seems persuasive so that is a plus. I think there needs to be more descriptive facts added, because so far the article is a little too simple.The sources are current and do work when clicked on. One suggestion I would work on is media, I think pictures and media would help this article a lot. The sources seem to be well done, there are more than 3 which is a good sign. I think there needs to be information about the demographic of the people who speak it as well. The article seems to be well done and the content seems to be very helpful if someone was looking to learn about the language. The article needs some fixes but overall it is decently made.

Suhayb Khadr