User:YapMel/Dr. Leticia E. Afuang/Bruhgirl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

YapMel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:YapMel/Leticia E. Afuang


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The intro provides a clear and concise overview of the main points of your article, without providing too many details. The sections in the article elaborate on the different topics very nicely, without sounding redundant. All the information and content are relevant and neutral. The sections are organized nicely. I would suggest adding a summary of any major findings she had in her research and publications. Adding an image of her and any other images relevant to her research to help readers visualize the work that she does. Overall, your article is in nice shape, just need some minor edits on the sections I mentioned above.