User:Yare.26/MeToo movement/Gracemuranaka Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Yare.26


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yare.26/MeToo_movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * MeToo movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that you have a good chunk of information established in your sandbox. I think you could also add how the specific trends on social media has allowed victims be open to the experiences that they have gone through. Your work adds something new to the article and makes it more relevant to how the #metoo movement is still relevant to today and in new forms. I only saw one source in the bibliography, so maybe finding more research will give you some more ideas to add to the sandbox. Your tone is neural and evidence is presented in a factual manner. Furthermore, how have these trends have pushed the "Me too" movement. I think it would be interesting if you wrote about how Twitter has become a place for women to warn others about an experience that they endured with a man. Women has turned social media into a resource to share about sexual assault and attempt to protect other women. Has the "Me too" movement created more unity between women. There were a few spelling errors and grammar edits that were in your sandbox as well.