User:Yaritzalopez/Human rights in Costa Rica/Lfreeman333 Peer Review

Peer Review
User:Yaritzalopez
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Yaritzalopez/Human rights in Costa Rica:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Human rights in Costa Rica:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article was informative, and the edits enhanced the content. There was only one source cited and I was disappointed to see that there were no scholarly sources included. My suggestions are:


 * I would end the first sentence with “refugee rights” and start a new sentence beginning with “historically”.
 * I would end the first sentence in the second paragraph after the word “Panama”
 * I would start the next sentence with “The majority of refugees migrating to these areas…”
 * I would break up the sentence that starts with “While Costa Rica has traditionally…” into two starting after “undocumented immigrants”. The new sentence could lead with something like, “These challenges led to heightened restrictions…”
 * I would reevaluate the need for the number of commas in the first sentence of paragraph three
 * I would expand the second sentence of paragraph three for clarity purposes. If it were standalone, it would be unclear.
 * I pondered the terms “human right” and “positive externality” used in the last sentence of paragraph three. Did Costa Rica determine that education is a “human right”?
 * I would suggest incorporating more scholarly contributions into your article