User:Yasmeen allan/sandbox

every body i want your opinion on this paragraph please :

causes of illiteracy there are many reasons of illiteracy in our community .first of all ,the educational system;for example,most education system now focus on the quantity of education not quality. moreover,the lack of necessary equipment that help to deliver information the best way to students .secondly, get students out of school in early age,to illustrate, many girls get out from school to get marry ,as i witness that in 10th grade three times.also,boys might get out from school to work in their family property and business .last but not least,the occupation actions and restriction ,to illustrate,the israeli government has limit the subjects that we can learn in our schools and collages ;further more ,the jewish solders cause alot of conflicts on the checkpoints which cause the Palestinian students to be late for their lectures .lastly ,illiteracy have many causes in my country.

hope you give me your real opinion soon before i give it to doctor ♥♥♥ jazzz