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A Perfect Day (2005 film)

According to the guidelines sheet that was given, the lead should be descriptive and list major topics which will be talked about later in the article. However, in the article "A Perfect Day" the editor fails to give a descriptive enough lead, all they list in this article it the film name and the director. I would add more information a good lead should at least be 3-4 sentences.

The Plot should be more informative not that it spoils the whole movie but gives a sense what the story-line will look like. I believe this plot is a dry description of this film.

When listing the cast, the editor does a good job on listing only the main characters and if they are well-known adding more detail, but since none of these actors/actresses have taken on big roles there is no need to.

The editor does not include anything on the production of the movie. Which leaves a lot of question on if this film was worthy enough to have an article written on its behalf.

The editor does not include the release as a major point, however he/she does briefly mention in the lead that it is a 2005 Lebanese film.

The editor does not include a reception so there is no way of knowing how good or bad the film was rated or criticized. Given that they left out this information I would say that the film didn't do so well in the reviews/reception.

For others they added the soundtracks to the movie and the artist of them.

They do include a category for this article and what types of films and I believe what other places have viewed the movie

The editor does not include an info-box so there is no way of having an overview of the film.

In conclusion, I would say that this article is very under developed, it lacks major points that all film articles should include. Therefore, by not including this it makes the film seem unworthy of having its own article.