User:Yasmin9901/Malahat First Nation/Camlak43 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yasmin9901


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yasmin9901/Malahat_First_Nation?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Malahat First Nation

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead to the article is very short and only describes where the Malahat reside. To improve this, you could include the population of the nation, the actual land size that the Malahat govern, or even who the current chief of the Nation is.

For content, all your content is very well organized into different subcategories that describe relevant aspects of Malahat society as well as history. For geography, it is great that you addressed what resources the nation obtains and what industrial processes they take on, such as mining. One thing that could be added is addressing how many reservations the Malahat live on and how many acres of land they have ownership of. Other than that, your content is very up to date based on the time the sources you used were last updated. I think it is really great that you touch on how the Malahat have been proponents of Indigenous activism as well as how the current pandemic has affected the indigenous Malahat people.

For your sources, you did a very nice job organizing them and presenting relevant sources that inform the reader of several different perspectives of the Malahat Nation as well as their history, culture, and change over time.

Overall, I think you have a solid draft to your article. Continue to add more details in your content section and continue to make sure your article remains neutral from bias.