User:YawnChick/Linglestown, Pennsylvania/ClairaJ Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yawnchick


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:YawnChick/Linglestown, Pennsylvania


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Linglestown, Pennsylvania

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * In the koons park revision there is no source linked to the information. I'm not sure which one of your sources you added the information but there is also no sources linked in the original article.
 * I noticed the original article has two sections called "schools." I would think about making it one section.
 * I think you should add more information in general. The revisions seem to only be one or two sentences in each section that you added to.
 * You have enough sources.
 * There is that section titled "noble person" in the original article and I figure it would be difficult to find more information to add to it, but the one sentence that is there needs a period at the end of it.