User:Yaydnew/Food distribution/Manorhe18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wendy Ayala - Yaydnew


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yaydnew/Food_distribution?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The first sentence you added did not seem very neutral in tone and should be supported (either in the lead by adding a citation or later on).

Content
I did not see where you added an edit in the volunteer and local section. The Distribution and Food insecurity section is good, but I think the last sentence can have a lot more detail and clarification on why it is difficult as well as add more statistics to achieve a more neutral tone. For example " In the United States, there are many organizations all over that have the same similar goal " can probably be its own sentence with how many organizations or examples of federally recognized organizations, etc.