User:Yaydnew/Food distribution/Natalieychu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

username: Yaydnew


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * food distribution sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * incredibly strong and direct leading statement that is concise, neutral, and flows well
 * great usage of hyperlinks to support your article
 * the quote at the end this section in really successful in diversifying the conversation and adding relevant content to the existing article

Article body


 * could the word 'individuals' be replaced with 'volunteers' in line 3 of 'volunteer and local' section?
 * could ARRR be linked to a website of sorts to make the article stronger?
 * suggestion: "organizations that are founded to target food insecurity have relied on food distribution to serve people in need of regular sustenance."
 * really enjoyed the final quote that you added in the article body— its well sourced and very current!