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Ye348 (talk) 00:55, 12 February 2018 (UTC)

Notes related to Wikipedia work and activities.

Article to evaluate: "Gerald W. Smith"

Analysis outline: proposed rewording of some sections in the article.

Excerpt from original article: "He served in virtually all of the Offices of the Engineering Economy Division of American Society for Engineering Education (ASEE), including the chairmanship. In 1964 he was Iowa State's representative at the General Electric Professors conference; in 1968-1971 he was designated Iowa State's Alcoa Professor; in 1969 he was recipient of the Eugene L. Grant Award for best paper in The Engineering Economist from the American Society for Engineering Education (ASEE)."

Proposed rewording of excerpt from article:

"Gerald, in addition to serving as a chairman had served in nearly all aspects of the Engineering Economy Division of American Society for Engineering Education (ASEE). In 1964 he was was a representative at the General Electric Professors Conference, as well as the recipient of the Eugene L. Grant Award for best paper in the (ASEE) in 1969."