User:Yealee0401/Acute muscle soreness/Crystalchoy Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Acute Muscle Soreness
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Yealee0401/Acute muscle soreness

Lead

 * The Lead has been updated to reflect the new content added. The Lead does include an introductory sentence and a brief section on the article's major sections but contains some information that is not present in the rest of the article. The Lead is also concise and not overly detailed. Overall, the Lead allows the reader to understand the topic of the article but there is room for further improvement.

Content

 * The content added is relevant to the topic. The content added is up to date and are from reputable sources. There is some content missing missing from the Treatment section. Additional information on why the research was conflicting and the types of possible treatment methods can make the article stronger. There is no content that does not belong. Overall, the added content improves the article.

Tone and Balance

 * The content added is neutral. The article is written in third person and no personal opinions are present. There are no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position. The viewpoints are not overrepresented or underrepresented. The content does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another. The article overall does not contain bias.

Sources and References

 * Most of the content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information. There are no citations in the Lead. The sources are current and thorough. The links I clicked on work. Overall, most of the content is cited but there are a few areas that are missing citations.

Organization

 * The content added is well-written and easy for the reader to understand. The information is concise and clear. The content added does not have grammatical or spelling errors. The content is broken down into well-organized sections that reflect the major points. Overall, the added information is organized into appropriate sections.

Images and Media

 * No images were added.

For New Articles Only

 * The article is not a new article.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * The added content has improved the overall quality of the article, making the article more complete. The content added elaborated on the causes of acute muscle soreness with an explanation on the cellular level. The information is well-written and can be understood by the reader. The content added can be improved with additional information on the cellular mechanisms and possibly an image or diagram to have a visual representation of the material.