User:Yestothesun/Biofilms in industry/Kalearose.fajardo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yestothesun


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yestothesun/Biofilms_in_industry?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biofilms in industry

Lead

 * The lead is updated and very concise.
 * You could possibly switch the first and second sentence so the introductory sentence is more about their use in industry.
 * Maybe mention the biorefinery in the lead

Bioremediation

 * I really like all the context and background you give in the first few paragraphs.
 * Super thorough explanation of all the different types of reactors
 * everything looks up to date based on sources' publication dates.

Chemical Production

 * The content is presented from a neutral perspective. You presented pros and cons for using biorefineries.

EAB

 * I like that you added what is happening now and what is still being developed.
 * format the CO2 subscript in the last sentence

Other Notes

 * Really thorough overall!
 * You could consider breaking up some of the larger paragraphs. In the Chemical Production section, the first paragraph could be split at the sentence "Due to the structure of biofilms,..."
 * If there are companies/plants that use these reactors, you could say how they combat some of the disadvantages of using biofilm.