User:Yestothesun/Biofilms in industry/Yuqingli1015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yestothesun


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yestothesun/Biofilms_in_industry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biofilms in industry

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

Good info in the lead part, however I would suggest in the beginning give a brief definition on what biofilm is (or link to the current biofilm page) might helps the reader understand later content.

Applications

A wide range of application examples were added, very informative and detailed explanations. I like it content wise, but I would suggest to organize it better (such as have sections divide up into environmental/chemical/electronics applications, instead of just put all of them into one big section). Having sections divide up can help your reader to find the information they want to see faster :)

 References 

Most references are from recent years, they are all related to the topic and are appropriate sources.

 General Comments: 

I like all of your edits overall! Excellent content wise, but if you would like you might want to add a sentence or two to mention characteristics of biofilms, which can be a good lead into the application section. Also if you would like to maybe divide up the sections so it's easier to read:)