User:Yesvery875/The book of curiosities/Mmille12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yesvery875


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yesvery875/The_book_of_curiosities?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
It's so great that you're working on a new article! And you have found so much information. This will be a real contribution to the topic.

Throughout the article, you do a very good job of maintaining an objective tone. There is only one instance where it walks the line in the Rectangular Map of the World (the part that says 'unique and interesting')

I think if you want to do more research on the map, that would be good, but it might be more balanced if you focus on some other folios as well.

Perhaps linking more of your words to other Wiki articles will help readers.

This is well written, well organized, has good citations (lots of good sources) and is a great start on a new article. Besides what I mentioned before, some more pictures could be nice (although I know that might be hard with copyright restrictions) and the more you can find and write about, the better.

The organization is also straightforward and clear for the most part. The only part that wasn't immediately clear was the 'Composition' section because it could mean a few things, especially in this context. Maybe changing that to something more specific would be helpful.

I really think you are on the right track, this is an amazing start and I am excited to see how this develops!